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Issue #228 • Neutrality

Marketing language

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Opened 5 years ago by

Dawson Sewell

Assigned to

Joshua Dance

Issue opened by Dawson Sewell — 1 May, 2019 7:20 pm

Dawson Sewell

commented 5 years ago

Hello Joshua, Thank you for contributing to the Grow.com page here on Golden. However, it's written with strong marketing-style language, instead of the neutral, third-party, non-promotional language per Golden's writing guide - https://support.golden.com/hc/en-us/articles/360010404333-Golden-writing-guide Could you please check it out and re-phrase it according to the guide? Thank you!

Joshua Dance

commented 5 years ago

For sure. Any examples of the marketing language you want me to check?

Joshua Dance

commented 5 years ago

Made some changes. Can't figure out how to cite a source.

Dawson Sewell

commented 5 years ago

Hello Joshua, I took a look at the changes you made and it looks much better! I also expanded on the funding you mentioned Grow received.

Joshua Dance

commented 5 years ago

Looks great. Added the dates to the timeline.