Buoyant (company)
Buoyant is a service mesh infrastructure for cloud-native applications founded in 2015 by William Morgan.
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All issuesIssue #256 • Neutrality
Marketing language & POV
CLOSED
Opened 6 years ago by
Jed Christiansen
Assigned to
Barry Parr
Issue opened by Jed Christiansen — 3 May, 2019 6:09 am
We are a small startup founded by senior ex-Twitter infrastructure engineers. We are well-funded and backed by some of the world's best investors. At Twitter we built the operating platform that helped conquer the Fail Whale--now our goal is to provide those same capabilities to every company.1
Buoyant has raised a total of $24M in funding over 4 rounds. Their latest funding was raised on Mar 13, 2019 from a Series B round.1
Buoyant is actively using 46 technologies for its website. These include Viewport Meta, IPhone / Mobile Compatible, and SSL by Default.
Jed Christiansen
Thanks for contributing to Golden, Barry. But these paragraphs have a mix of first-person / third-person point of view, and some of them are marketing language instead of being written in a neutral perspective. Details are on the Golden writing guide page here - https://support.golden.com/hc/en-us/articles/360010404333-Golden-writing-guide
Could you please help re-write this section in order to match the guide?
Barry Parr
Understood, but I'm not commited to this enough to want to take homework from you guys. I'll delete the page.
Jed Christiansen
Hi, Barry. I went ahead and undeleted your text and just condensed it a bit to change the point of view and remove marketing-style language. Thanks for contributing!
Issue closed by Jed Christiansen — 3 May, 2019 8:58 pm
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